0987UUI by tilda140
I like the melody and chords but I need to beef up the bottom end, what do you guys think? I really like the perc.

sounds good except the bottom end which u made no room for, so you would need to remix a lot of things(but you know this). the bottom end is a deal killer on a track like this.

Nice mellow track that.

I didn't notice anything missing in the bottom end, but i'm on little earbud heaphones.


A bit more modulation of some of the synth parameters in the main part of the track would serve it well and add a bit more interest and also layering up the main lead line as well.

The percussion does work very well.


Nice one.

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One suggestion: widen the hats (that start 0:30) a bit in the stereo field. They seem too narrow at the moment.