Hi guys. I'm new to this forum. I just wanted to sort of promote my remix that i posted on youtube.. I guess thats how you would call it. Please tell me how you guys think it is. Its not professional but i really tried.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CcjpftKV1FM

Here it is.

Please rate and comment. Thanks~~

P.S Feedbacks from pros would be very nice

You have the right idea, but the percussion is pretty weak. The arrangement/track itself is decent though. Good job.

Thanks for the feedback. Also, what do you mean by percussion? Like the kick,snare. and hi hats or overall percussive sounds that i could have added. I think my kick was screwed up cus of side chain compression.. I really like to know more about how i could improve my remixes in the future.

Pretty dope. Definately some sick riffs in there. I would a have to agree that the percussion (all drums in general) are not as upfront as needed. Seems like maybe a vocal compressor or SCC is holding things back? i donno, either way great creativity, production value is decent but can obviously use some work (track levels seem to low or high in certain points). Good shit though.