Good morning everyone. This is starts as progressive trance and then drops into tech trance on the outro. still working intro but all the core elements are there (i think). I would greatly appreciate feedback (with reference to time in the track if possible.) PM me if you would like to work on it as well, so i can send you the files.

here is the MP3

Velvet House

Last edited by serginka on Feb-02-2010 at 18:13

Melodically its not really my cup of tea, but i can tell the Production is top notch, all frequencies covered, its crisp and sharp, and it has those subtle sounds and fx that you dont really notice, but if they werent there you would notice the difference (if that makes sense lol) i actually preffered the key change at 3:07 when it gets darker, nice work though.

Starts off with a nice pad, then the sub kicks in which is even better(maybe a little loud). Your sub is really loud its not giving the kick room to breath(sidechain it a little harder).

Great track

There is too much sub bass EQ it slightly I would also add some whitenoise to the break down or after the break down when first kick come in cause there is lack of power (or maybe some good crash?) when the beat come in.

Overally the track is very interesting especially those saw cuts in second part nice work.

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