So i come back to this track and made some drastic changes to the original and pretty much got it to where i want it to be, Only mixed in my headphones so far could maybe do with the high end lowering slightly and same with the pads apart from that sounds fine i'll listen bk on speakers tomorrow and see what needs fixing .
sounds beautiful! great uplifting and melodic track. One thing I would say is that you hear the jump kick with the cymbal splash a little too much.. maybe vary that up a bit =). besides that, sounds great! loving the toms.