This is my third tune, made it in 6 hours.

Listen, and comment. I appreciate every comment you give. thanks..


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Second edit:

http://soundcloud.com/potatochip/potatochip-beautiful-pandora-second-edit

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Last edited by PotatoChip on Apr-10-2010 at 15:40

The melody is amazing. The biggest problem, I thought, was those frequency drops right in the middle of the song. The buildup was going so well, and then they started happening. Same with the climax. If you're going to throw those in, make them much longer and a little more subtle. They just seem to get in the way of the awesome melody.

Which one do you mean by frequency drop? Is it the melody?

thanks..

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No. I mean, the melody will be playing, then all of the sudden it sounds like the song is dunked deep under water then brought back up to the surface (the only way I can really explain it). It's an automated frequency drop that happens a few times through the song.

oh, you mean that I cut the frequency too quickly on the climax? yes, I consider it as a mistake now, I thought it is good lol.

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Yeah, it was in the buildup too. Other than that, though, it's a very nice sounding melody.

Another great melody from you! You just need to work on your technical aspects (levelling, equalising your elements so they fit together nicer) and you'll be producing absolute stormers. Your percussion could be a little more complex too, so it can really drive the track along. The Tutorials thread in the production studio forum here on TA was/is extremely helpful for me, take a look. Once you start developing your skills you should definitely go back to these tracks your making and re-work them and they'll be awesome!

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Originally posted by novastorm Another great melody from you! You just need to work on your technical aspects (levelling, equalising your elements so they fit together nicer) and you'll be producing absolute stormers. Your percussion could be a little more complex too, so it can really drive the track along. The Tutorials thread in the production studio forum here on TA was/is extremely helpful for me, take a look. Once you start developing your skills you should definitely go back to these tracks your making and re-work them and they'll be awesome!

Thanks. I'm new in making tunes, this is the third times I produce my music. Well, I'm new in FL studio (starting using 3 weeks ago), I also need more pads, synth, lead sounds, etc. I would release 4 tunes in a week if I had more tools. hehe..


btw, this is my second edit. Dedicated to you, trance hearted people. Enjoy


http://soundcloud.com/potatochip/po...ora-second-edit

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Your melody are pretty damn awesome like novastorm said get the technical aspect's ie mastering/sound etc and you'll be creating amazing tracks i wouldnt be suprised if you where signed sometime in the future with more experience and knowledge behind you good luck

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Thank you. What you have said gives me fervor to produce more, and more. Tomorrow I'll make the another tune if I'm not busy. ^^

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