Musically, this track works out really well, and the mix isn't so far off that it's unlistenable, either. There's some muddiness that could be corrected with complimentary EQ on all the parts.

I don't think that sound coming in on the break does the track any favors, but that could be a preference of mine and not something you ought to correct if you're happy with it.

I wanted something more at the relaunch other than a reversion back to the leit motif of the first part. It definitely gets a little repetitive and grating, by then.

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my old stuff, not quite up to snuff - but I still dig it - UPDATED 9/23/2012