Mixing is nice, full on sounds etc.

I do miss a big hook in the track though to make it more personal.

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Really original, with great taste of sound, short but you can definitely hear a direction and a tone of this track and where it's going.

Great with really potential of being screamer one.

Cheers

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Thanks both of you. I thought the breakdown was kind of a hook, maybe you can give me a couple ideas?

Please get your new parts and finish this track up!!!

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Really love the melody, although I'd like to hear it repeat a few times over so the listener can actually appreciate it. This has that choppy Wallbridge style to it (pause-shuffle-shuffle-whooomp and so on if you know what I mean lol) which is starting to annoy me cos its being done too much but I can't deny that it's current and works on a dancefloor. My only other suggestion would be that it sounds thin in the upper midrange, where a pad would normally be. I suppose a sustained pad sound would counteract this choppy style though so put something else in there, some synthy stabs perhaps

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Awesome track!!!!

i've not been in the music cafe for a while so i've missed a few posts but this is really, really good. Very commercial sounding too.

I agree that it needs just that one more part, but i'm thinking vocals perhaps. Something like Tiesto (sorry to use the T word!) 'knock you out' vocals.

Brrrrilliant track, ficish it!!!

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Glad you like it man! Gonna have to really finish these and have 4 killer tracks ready.