The kick is pretty flat mate. Its got a good sub part but its lost in the mix.

The atmosphere is okay, but it's hard to judge much on the 1:45 that has no lead, and only a bit of percussion.

The percussion is also a bit blah right now in my opinion as it all blends out into obscurity.

___________________
Grand Quoted Lines
"Change cannot be prevented, only guided." - David Brin's Earth
"Fighting for Peace is like *#^$ing for virginity" - Crazytown's Sorry
"Be the Change you want" - Gandhi
San Diego Trance Family Co-Founder
EDM Identity Content Strategist A&R