i like this sort of, the drums aren't giving the proper vibe but the other sounds are. bass is punchy and the overall atmosphere is nice, not a fan of how the break comes about. you have this nice groove going and it' just dies into this anticlimatic and you introduce a supersaw pad which works eventually into the track but the way it's comes in. it just give a bad vibe.

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hey Subtle,

im writing as i listen, nice bassline! cool intro.. the vocals are pretty cool too. the overall track is nice.. think maybe a high pitched melody of some sort would sound cool somewehere in the first 2 mins.
keep it up man.


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Thanks for the comments guys.

I agree about whats being said.. somehow i like think the last 2 minutes of the track is the best though im not quite sure why.
Deffo needa work on that break and what happens afterwards.

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I thought that some of the highs were a little too bright. Otherwise the mix is your usual flawless. I like the breakbeat direction you seem to be taking and I definitely hear some exploration of various possibilities between this song and the last one.

I like the melody but I think there's also room for exploration with it. It sort of peaked out a little but, really, it was enjoyable.

Anyway, I really hope you continue doing the breaks. I can definitely foresee good tunes coming out of that, but I'm sure you'll kick the ass of anything you take on.

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Good track you have there buddy, it have some sweet elements and i really dig that second part. Just maybe you could work on progression a bit more and energy flow, its a bit to static for breaktrance.

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This is good stuff. I particularly enjoy the "back" of the track. There is one percussion hit which kinda sounds like a door being knocked, that I found quite distracting (nothing major at all).

Quite a dark track. Well done again!