I don't know, all of it just screams "this has been done way too many times before" - there's no real catchy element to it.

Also, even though the pads in the break sound nice the whole break in itself is way too long. Kills the track completely.

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Hmmmm

I think this one is still very much at the 'collection of ideas' stage and i'd agree that there's no real hook there yet.

That background arp that comes in at about 0.50 should be worked on and brought forward I think.

It's good that there's plenty of ideas coming onto your head though. Best way to work I say

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Yeah I apologize for the nothing interesting part

A lot of times I just get something in my head, and realize I have to create it in Ableton. Sometimes it turns out good and sometimes it doesn't. I'll see what I can do with it

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Hey, dont apologize! It's your own track, you should do what you want with it

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Yes it is

But it's made for people. If people don't really like it, then no success

I'm mostly working on Notorious right now, just for you, Lascodi

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Originally posted by Anakratis just for you, Lascodi

I'm hurt.


Deeply hurt

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Originally posted by tehlord I'm hurt. Deeply hurt

I'm still working on Omicron for you, tehlord.

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Originally posted by Anakratis I'm still working on Omicron for you, tehlord.

You are forgiven.




Just.

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Originally posted by Anakratis Yes it is But it's made for people. If people don't really like it, then no success I'm mostly working on Notorious right now, just for you, Lascodi

<3 <3 <3

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Anakratis - let me just tell you man, that I'm spending lots of time reviewing tens of different track all over web - commenting on almost all of them - this is brilliant (for 16 years old) and you doing much better than some of us here on TA. ON top of this you are design/create sound bank for Sylenth1 - bloody impressive man.

This track have (only IMO) all of the aspect/potential of great track. I notice that this track has three parts to it not fully develop yet but the idea (in those three parts) is really good my friend, so keep going with this development, stay positive and finish it - good things happen to good (and hard working) people

My $0.02

Cheers.

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Originally posted by Lascodi <3 <3 <3

Haha, thanks Trancelover!

I'll defo also work hard on this one! Got a lot of work coming up ahead after school's finished

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