I liked this but I also thought it was missing something. It felt like the mix could be just a little more refined - even though it's really not too far off, and that maybe even another part or two could be added. Still, it's been cheerfully added to my collection.

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the melow that comes in in the 2:45 its pretty good
for me, its the best part of your track
the bassline and everything else .. well, i didnt like that much

for me, you should do a new track , with the melow that i told u
you can make a rlly sick track with this

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not bad have to agree with eddie i like the groove just needs some tweaks and it will be sweet

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that synthloop that comes in @ 1.00m and deosn't go away, get quite annoying.
alos a bit too much mud in the 500hz area in your mix.
I like the idea, but it might need a bit more arranging to shine

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Pretty much what has already been said and you are good to go. I do like the lead @ 2:45. That could be used to great affect in another track, or build more tension in this one then unleash that lead.

I like the perc's and bassline going. Hope you update it.

Not my cup of tea mate. Still, the sounds individually sound cool. I couldn't find a fun groove or anything in this one.

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