Well, Yes like stated I did this within 2 and half hours as I used the pacthes / sounds etc already in older tracks of mine.
But now as you guys gave me so much good feedback I m thinking of improving some of the FX and the whole MIX-Down.
Guess the Bass shoud get some more compression in order get some more punch. maybe EQing the lower synth down a little bit (Bass-Patch is layerd).
Oh, my Kick I actually love my kick, used in other productions too. It's kind of self-made and was so happy about the sounding . Layerd different kicks once and was actually happy with that one all the time. Well might look whether any other might fit better...
It couldn't get released as it is just a remix/re-edit (used the original melody, vocal, lead - parts), but I will re-post the second-version.
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Had me hooked right from the first few beats, love the shuffled groove to the percussion. This would make for a great techy interlude in a late night trance set, really jolt the dancefloor awake if they started getting too blissed out
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Jun-29-2010 14:38
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...so added now a second-version
yerahhh some more FX... more use of the room etc....
My biggest critics on this is that it sounds like being squeezed through a too small hole. In other words, I miss dynamic range and a more powerful beat, as every part of the track seems to have the same volume, what makes it sound kinda flat.
I actually love my kick, used in other productions too. It's kind of self-made and was so happy about the sounding 
. Layerd different kicks once and was actually happy with that one all the time. Well might look whether any other might fit better...
