Checked the first one out..

I must admit I dislike that "Swirl" sound that well, especially noticable in the start

Other than that I find it sort of sad that the tensioncurve only really goes up, could use a little variation.

Also sounds very messy

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Originally posted by VLC Checked the first one out.. I must admit I dislike that "Swirl" sound that well, especially noticable in the start Other than that I find it sort of sad that the tensioncurve only really goes up, could use a little variation. Also sounds very messy

"Messy"?

Please elaborate.

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Originally posted by photonix "Messy"? Please elaborate.

i think he means the mix mate.. not enough clear seperation between the individual elements.

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quite like your trancey thing.

People are too hung up on messy mixes etc.... a meesy mix can be easily fixed by someone who knows how. We should really be commenting on the elements of the track and not the mastering skill of the artist.

anyway.

Nice track, like the sounds used and the chilled relaxed vibe. Really nice strings and stuff in there. The melody is really nice, did you write it yourself?

Like the sort of relaxed kick and bass.. nothing too slamming. This would make a great forst track for a dj, get em warmed up.

Needs some playing around with engineering side as sounds clashing, but this is a technicality. You should do some reading on mastering, and equalization etc... What processing did you use? Any limiting or compression?

p.s. please have a listen to mine and feedback. palebluedot on the forum main bit... tah