Cant comment too much on the mix due to the speakers I have on right now. Starts of ok, nice bass going and arrangement is good. The stabby lead from 2:40 isnt nice, more annoying.

Work on more variation to keep it interesting as it gets repetitive, but this is going in the right direction so keep it up.

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Originally posted by alanzo It's like sifting through cat shit to find a penny. In the end, it wasn't worth the effort.

oh man you gotta do something about the dog whistle at 30 seconds

naaahn!

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Originally posted by meriter oh man you gotta do something about the dog whistle at 30 seconds

I thought that at the time. That noise is too high. People will lose interest straight away

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Originally posted by alanzo It's like sifting through cat shit to find a penny. In the end, it wasn't worth the effort.