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In answer to your question, most tracks have potential, it just depends on how you finish them (I know, captain obvious statement of the day).
As said, the vocal sounds out of place and more like something a DJ would do with two tracks as it doesn't gel with the track. It doesn't occupy the same sonic space as the other elements and I think should be a little more dubby as in more verb and I think some delay would work wonders.
As the track currently stands, it's very linear and doesn't really take me anywhere. It doesn't really give a feeling of depth and could do with some more points to drive it along.
Don't get me wrong, I have heard a lot worse released but that doesn't mean I would play this.
I don't necessarily like the chord progression, to me I find the last change in the phrase is one of those that just sucks out energy and feels a bit forced, just sounds a bit odd to me.
The vocal I think actually has the wrong rythm for the track and could possibly benefit from being stretched a little but that would probably degrade it to a point where it sounds weird. I think in a track like this you need the words to be sung a little longer, half the bpm of the track if you get my meaning.
In terms of technical skills though you have a lot going for you and appart from the percussion lacking a little drive, it still works well for you. I look forward to hear more from you.
Many thanks
Nem
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))) This vocal fited perfectly too at that moment. Its quite catchy if you listen to it a few times, but I agree that it needs a bit of tweaking or I might just get it out of the song completely. 
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