Hey all! , created this techno/trance song called Roswell,but need some feedback! So some tips to make my music sound better would be greatly appreciated! - AttickMan

Roswell - techno trance music by AttickMan by AttickMan

Hmmm, soundcloud doesnot always seem to work, anyway, youtube link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZnJf...e=youtube_gdata

Last edited by Attickman on Jul-30-2010 at 07:50

nobody wants a pie?

Cool suspenseful atmosphere you got going here! Reminded me of CJ Bolland - The Prophet. Was kinda wondering what was going on up til 1:10 but after that the groove is really infectious. Not a huge techno aficionado but to my ears the offbeat hat sounds way too harsh and the kick is a little too far back in the mix. Not sure on the crowd FX either, at first I thought this was a live rip of something rather than your own track and you don't want that!

Will you deliver said pie to Australia? My preference is apple pie, a la mode.

___________________
soundcloud.com/immersiv

But when you lay still, in the fallen tides
That's where I'll be

Ha i knew someone would buy it! But thanx for the compliments and tips! guess i gonna get rid of the crowd, although still hoping that the song will somehow get played for a real (and dancing) audience

Pie will be delivered in Australia!!, not sure if it's still crunchy

Yeah - let the dancefloor do their own cheering as they see fit!

Ambient noise/texture works well in this sort of spooky tune but go for something less cliched - Some sort of scuttling sound or something other-worldly to go with that Roswell voice grab. You could even probably use the crowd sounds but filter and mess with it so it's less recognisable.

Edit: Pie will arrive crunchy AND a la mode or I'm taking all my commentary back

___________________
soundcloud.com/immersiv

But when you lay still, in the fallen tides
That's where I'll be

Oh, this isn't a live rip? Jeez. Lose the crowd dude. It's pretty neat otherwise.