Listening through headphones right now

Melody and bass sound great, Id suggest throw in some perussive loops to spicen up the hhats

And bring out the highs in the clap

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listening, sounds clean. not much there so i cant really be ruthless.

Thanks my TA chums.

I've now changed the OHH and spiced up the clap a bit.

I shall remain refrained and not post 30 different versions of this however!

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Updated to rough intro stage. Obviously no sweeps, FX, crashes etc at this stage


http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9526262

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I can't download without registering, so I'll assume that you trust the "hi-fi" sample is good enough for us to make our judgements.

Mixing wise, I honestly can't hear anything wrong with it. It's plesant on the ears and easy to follow, so you won't be hearing any complaints on my part

Thanks Owen old chap

I've just uploaded the WAV here if your ears can stand a rolling bassline again

http://www.mediafire.com/?x9x5nl6fl8yff10


I think the kick may be a bit on the thick side after listening again a few time, but I still think it's remarkably clear for a very busy mix at an early stage.

I haz liek teh HS80s a lot.

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Sounds good. Any feedback I could offer would be according to taste. Nothing sounded overly harsh or dull, however.


Perhaps just too many notes.

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Originally posted by EddieZilker Perhaps just too many notes.

How DAAAAAAAAARE you!

This is something I doubt i'll ever change


Here's an update with more of a track intro layout, although it's still very rough with little swish at this stage.

I'm feeling the kick is too loud now maybe?



http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9526262

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Same link updated AGAIN!

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Originally posted by tehlord How DAAAAAAAAARE you! This is something I doubt i'll ever change

Ah, Mozart! Don't take it personally. It's just that people can't follow that much meticulously crafted music.

Yours Truly,
Salieri



I'll be sure and check out the new mix, in a bit here.

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Originally posted by tehlord How DAAAAAAAAARE you! This is something I doubt i'll ever change Here's an update with more of a track intro layout, although it's still very rough with little swish at this stage. I'm feeling the kick is too loud now maybe? http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9526262

quite like this
the clap/snare was clashing with the kick and i noticed some strange unwanted noise in the first 30 sec i played it again and yeah some strange clashing going on

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