Registered: Aug 2009
Location: Zurich, Switzerland
the beginning sounds promising, but the saw pad and the pluck don't fit at all
Sep-08-2010 11:48
Mr.Mystery
Static Guru
Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Vantaa
The beat needs to go, right now it sounds like sampled off an eighties hard rock track - completely lacks punch. Percs are almost completely nonexistent.
The whole track sounds like the high-end was completely cut off, almost to the point where it sounds like something coming muffled through a door from the other room.
The opening chord progression is nice but the synths introduced later are out of key and clashing badly.
just a one minute sample, I have punched the kick and it is noticeable in the graph. I shifted the synths higher, changed and lengthened progressions, added percs as well. Am I heading in the right direction?
ps mr mystery, this is actually my 15th project or so, i was just always fiddling with ableton session view and never made the leap to arrangement.
just a one minute sample, I have punched the kick and it is noticeable in the graph. I shifted the synths higher, changed and lengthened progressions, added percs as well. Am I heading in the right direction?
ps mr mystery, this is actually my 15th project or so, i was just always fiddling with ableton session view and never made the leap to arrangement.
get some better sounding sample kit's, the drums are pretty much the only thing that's horrible with this track so far.
