Here's my new track. Don't be harsh on me, I'm 17 and I'm new to production. I hope you apreciate my work as I will apreciate your replies

http://soundcloud.com/x3lush_xxx/xe...go-original-mix

Thank you,
Alex.

Good vibe overall I like the melody and sounds all fit together very nice. I want more bass please

Very nice for someone so young keep at it!

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Originally posted by kevin shawn Good vibe overall I like the melody and sounds all fit together very nice. I want more bass please Very nice for someone so young keep at it!

Many thanks my friend. I need as many feedback as I can, so I can decide rather or not release this track.

Thank you!

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Originally posted by ImAlex Many thanks my friend. I need as many feedback as I can, so I can decide rather or not release this track. Thank you!

Kick sounds a skosh harsh and the highs might be a little too present. I also think it might use a little more low-end in the bass-line and kick. Wait, before you go and wreck a good track on my say-so, for criticism which echos mine.

All-in-all, it's an excellent track and I might be the only person hearing the harshness of it. I really like what you did with the melody and harmonies, after the break. I'm guessing there's a bit of a substantial music back-ground supporting your "novice" production.

Nice work. Please keep at it.

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Now with extra singles!
my old stuff, not quite up to snuff - but I still dig it - UPDATED 9/23/2012