"say kids, what time is it?"...haha this phrase came to my mind just a second ago )...s-express was it? bomb the bass...?

anyhow,

here is my second track, quite different from the previous production. If you could please give me a few comments I would appreciate it sooooo much...its hard to get feedback from ppl when you're stuck in your dark studio all the time... ))))

please comment....good, bad, horrible..?

Konrad K - Stupid by konradk

Last edited by Konrad K on Sep-23-2010 at 05:52

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It was some kinda issue with soundcloud...

it works now ))

I like the musical idea, and progression. I would definitely add more lows, and work on a harder kick!

I just fixed the bottom end...much better now )))

Wayyy better than my second track for sure.
Good mixing - you have a clear ear for it from what I hear.

I like the kick but some other sounds were a bit cliche - like the open hat and synth - maybe change them for something more ecclectic and original / up to date.

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thanks ). will get some more tweaks done to it.

Nice idea m8. Has good energy/drive and kept me listening happily till the end.

Progressive trance 4tw.

Kick seems right to me.

I like the dark atmosphere and the vocal samples help. Not sure the second one fits as well, but it doesn't stick out in a bad way.

Everything seems to fit and nothing really stands out.

Sounds very remix-able in my mind as well.

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Originally posted by theterran Nice idea m8. Has good energy/drive and kept me listening happily till the end. Progressive trance 4tw. Kick seems right to me. I like the dark atmosphere and the vocal samples help. Not sure the second one fits as well, but it doesn't stick out in a bad way. Everything seems to fit and nothing really stands out. Sounds very remix-able in my mind as well.

thanks, you made my weekend