Hey guys, looking for some feedback on this one im working on, cheers

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Seriously, what are you using for that bassline? Bass drums? it sounds terrible and ruins the track.

Everything else sounds fairly promising. Nice pads, interesting stab chords. But that rolling 'bass' in the background sounds terrible and ruins the track imo.

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Originally posted by Bren-F Seriously, what are you using for that bassline? Bass drums? it sounds terrible and ruins the track. Everything else sounds fairly promising. Nice pads, interesting stab chords. But that rolling 'bass' in the background sounds terrible and ruins the track imo.

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Find a new set of sounds to make a track with, you have talent these sounds just aren't working well for you. You need more bass and percussion I think. Again the talent is there keep practicing and finishing tracks that's how we get better

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Originally posted by kevin shawn Find a new set of sounds to make a track with, you have talent these sounds just aren't working well for you. You need more bass and percussion I think. Again the talent is there keep practicing and finishing tracks that's how we get better

cheers m8

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Originally posted by kingdan2000 not really sure on the drums or bassline main synth is good Listen to my track i've just uploaded. Kinda similar to chicane http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mMYQmDdqqtY

not bad m8! how do you make your videos? i use imovie but the sound quality is poo

thanks for the reply
I exported the track from logic to itunes and then used ishow demo version to record the logic screen on mute. Then I combined the muted video with the exported audio track from logic in imovie
hope that helps!