Hello guys I am doing this. It is very simple so far but I want to hear ideas of if you guys even like it

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menez - 5 am (Original Mix) by itsmenez

Last edited by Gimenez on Nov-07-2010 at 00:27

:-( No one? It sucks?

Hang on, dude. I'm getting ready to review a few tracks but I need to finish up something, first.









Yeah - I know it sucks waiting for that first review. Sorry this isn't it - but it's coming - soon...









Just a little longer....







Wait for it....

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LoL I saw the word "suck" and I am like "dang!" lol lets see how it goes... Hopefully you guys enjoy it

Kick a little harsh.

Like the bass-line coming in. Should probably come up a little more - seemed under-represented.

Once the percussion kicks in, the kick doesn't seem so bad, until it drops out, again.

Love the swirly pad and the water sounds. Really lovely work, in the back-ground.

The arpeggiating lead - a little too loud? Maybe I just have mix ear. I'd hesitate to change anything until you hear my sentiments echoed.

Really kind of a cool tune and very, very original. Lots of stuff going on, here.

I've got my eye on this tune.

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I agree with teh Eddie.

The elements you've got are nice. Well chosen sounds and a good sense of space and progression.

I can't really comment on the mix levels as to my ears they all seem off. I think the entire mix needs to go back to zero faders and start again by bringing each element up from zero.

Good ideas though.

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Thank you guys for the comments. Comments like these help greatly. I went ahead and upgraded the track. The kicks before were a little rough and took away the atmosphere. I added some extra bass and tweaked the base to sound a bit more smooth as well. I also messed with some volumes to see if it sounds better. Also made the percussion a bit easier on the track as well. Let me know what you guys think and thanks

I am following the advice written here

i like. good kick and relaxed vibe. Was there a bass in there?? didnt notice one.

Good soundgin percs. generally a professionally sounding track. cant fault it

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Originally posted by mark_gg_daniels i like. good kick and relaxed vibe. Was there a bass in there?? didnt notice one. Good soundgin percs. generally a professionally sounding track. cant fault it

Thank you sir. HMM I put the volume down on the bass because I thought it was too loud. I guess I gotta put it higher. I am glad people are liking this piece. Thank you sir!

For the others who heard the song before can you check it again please? thanks

Jérémy Menez (born 7 May 1987) is a French football player who currently plays for Italian club Roma in Serie A. He plays a variety of positions in the attacking midfield, most notably as a winger and a playmaker. Menez has been described as a two-footed technically skill playmaker with undeniable pace.

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