Any comments about track?

Sweet stuff bud, it just needs a bit more elements. When you extend it, it will be quite empty, so you need to work on that progression.

Also mixdown could be far better and cleaner for this type of tracks, but overall i like how it sounds.

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100% agree with you i'll try to fix it as soon as i can

i'm glad that someone like it

Sounds okay, the mix is really bad though, it's way too muddy, it sounds like you put reverb on absolutely everything.

The track sounds much better at 1:30 than at the beginning, I'm not really a big fan of the synths you're using though, they sound like presets. I like some of the chord progression but melodically you have way too much going on, layering is important but it just kind of sounds messy, especially since you seemed to try to give everything the same presence in the mix, some parts need to be in the background dude.

Keep working on it, there are good ideas.

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Sounds pretty solid at the intro to me. Has a nice metropolitan feeling melody and chord progression going. I like it. Be careful when you start breaking it down, you are entering clashy muddy zone. Analyze the spectrum. I would say at this point, your biggest problem might be energy control and EQ. The elements all sound pretty good, but you need to work on the arrangement. Dynamics are very important for introducing new sounds. I think the idea itself is really really good, and would be ideal for the club with a proper mix down. Garner more feedback here, and work on it a little more after a break. I like it mate, good work.