The synths from the off are very nicely done.

The rolling bass elements are not my taste, so it's a bit difficult to crit, but to my mind those parts sound faily standard - that's ok though if you like them.

For me the synths bass and drums sound like they could be glued together a bit better with more pump apparant.

You need a whole lot of 'interest drivers' such as good sweeps and so on to fill space throughout.

Good work though.

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Thanks!

And yes, that's my problem, I don't put enough "mojo" in my music ^^
I should work on that!

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