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I'll only provide you feedback on the mixdown so you may not have gotten to that yet...
I think you should lower the master volume and ensure you don't clip or limit the mix, and leave enough room for subsequent instrumentation.
You've chosen some bass-heavy instruments. It might pay to high-pass the second bass but unfortunately I don't have a sub to confirm that, so you may decide to leave in such a heavy amount of sub. Also you might want to remove the click at the start.
But I think your kick is definitely too bottom-heavy. I would lower the volume or high-pass the sub somewhat, and bring in more mid- and high-frequency attack.
The snare is far too low in volume in my opinion, and not that great sounding.
The synth at 0:42 definitely needs a low-pass filter to blend the extreme treble in.
Also high-pass the pad I think, and bring in more mid definition.
Musically I'll leave it over to someone else...
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Put an end to the loudness war. Don't limit or compress your mixdown until mastering; leave the master channel alone.
Contact me for mastering.
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