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hey man i like as it gets some momentum in the break the track overall is not bad...i would def increase volume on all instruments and find where each instruments sweet frequencies are... and maybe use reverb more...
in the break, the melody could use more work...try experiementing with the melody...
over all not bad as i said...but those instruments need to be brought into the mix more... 
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