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heey i ve listened to your track i think its good nice, choice of sounds ! im not a professional but in my oppinion try to make it in a faster bpm and also i think the whole track sounds a little bit boring (don't get it wrong).....next time try something different and add some powerful basses and pads and punchy kicks,for the rest i'm sure u will find some good melodys !
here's one my latest tracs if u could listen to it and tell me what you think !
Souhail Semlali - Crystal Dreams (Remake) by souhail Semlali

hey thanks for the feedback! its helpful.. i will definitely get some better bass and kicks going on...) cheers

your track was nice man...i enjoyed listening to it...it has a hopeful flavour to it...and the melody is nice...
...it's all about getting better...so thank you!

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you're welcome !
thanks for your comments on my track i'm glad you like it !
and like you said its all about getting better !

peace man!! )

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Mixing sounds tight enough, melody a bit bright for my tastes.. but i see where ure getting at and it does work.

Dont have any immediate critiques, good job.

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Originally posted by Subtle Mixing sounds tight enough, melody a bit bright for my tastes.. but i see where ure getting at and it does work. Dont have any immediate critiques, good job.

thanks for taking the time

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Mixing seems tight enough but not polished, meoldy doesn't have any direction however with some changes it can be great

hats are too quiet, and track lacks drive

keep at it man

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will do..thanks Sako...
hats-drive-direction-wax on wax off!

cheers!

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Funny how you say not to limit until the end, and yet this is limited plenty, or should I say clipped quite heavily. I won't go into too much detail on the mix because I can't...you've affected the master out too much for me to go into it.

Just watch the lower mids on the intro synth because it's sounding quite muddy. The kick/bass sounds boomy. Not quite sure what to suggest yet though. Hats/treble needs to come up. The upper mids also need more presence on certain instruments and their lower mids reduced.

But stop clipping the mix because it won't get you very far.

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Originally posted by Atlantis-AR Funny how you say not to limit until the end, and yet this is limited plenty, or should I say clipped quite heavily. I won't go into too much detail on the mix because I can't...you've affected the master out too much for me to go into it. Just watch the lower mids on the intro synth because it's sounding quite muddy. The kick/bass sounds boomy. Not quite sure what to suggest yet though. Hats/treble needs to come up. The upper mids also need more presence on certain instruments and their lower mids reduced. But stop clipping the mix because it won't get you very far.

..thanks..
i see what you mean...i will keep it under clipping....
it seems the low mids are also my new focus...both on the intro synth and on other instruments..cheers
and the kick..yeah..hmm..

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