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Keep going. I noticed some harmonic dissonance going on around 18-24 seconds. Keep it there, if that's what you intended, because it works.
In terms of quality, Mise, It's right at the threshold where there's not a whole lot anyone's going to be able to say that will help you, anymore. What I just made note of is something that could go either way as the content of a longer song and how that song progresses will make or break it, in terms of its context. Someone telling you to do something differently is an unnecessary distraction, at this point.
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my old stuff, not quite up to snuff - but I still dig it - UPDATED 9/23/2012
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