I'm guessing you want some feedback on it so far.

First off, big big sound. Seems pretty catchy too. When it all kciks in after break I can imagine a big female vox chop sample on ever other snare - something like 'wow' said in a sexy up close and personal way - this for me would give it a proper personality - but thats just personal though.

Not much more to say

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I'm guessing you want some feedback on it so far. First off, big big sound. Seems pretty catchy too. When it all kciks in after break I can imagine a big female vox chop sample on ever other snare - something like 'wow' said in a sexy up close and personal way - this for me would give it a proper personality - but thats just personal though. Not much more to say

Hey thanks man! I was thinking about recording a "WOO!" Sample or finding a good one actually

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Could use a little more groove after the breakdown. The saw could be nicer, too.

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Originally posted by Evolve140 Could use a little more groove after the breakdown. The saw could be nicer, too.

Yeah I'm still working on the synth in the break, but I actually disagree about the drop, I think it's lack of percussion is what makes the bassline hit so hard and it has that start and stop feeling that I was going for

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Originally posted by Seandroid Yeah I'm still working on the synth in the break, but I actually disagree about the drop, I think it's lack of percussion is what makes the bassline hit so hard and it has that start and stop feeling that I was going for

I am totally digging that feeling, I had to listen to the drop a couple times to wrap my head around it but yeah, I think you're fine without adding too many percs in there. The bass still sounds very bland like Evolve said, it definitely needs a lot of work as it still sounds like a plain saw. Other than that, I dig the groove and the breakdown is very smooth. Keep it up man

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Not my thing, but this has some big production value. It's not far off the modern electro music I might hear today. Get vocals and voila, you'll have a hit.

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Originally posted by Owsey2008 Not my thing, but this has some big production value. It's not far off the modern electro music I might hear today. Get vocals and voila, you'll have a hit.

Hey! Thanks man! I've actually got a finished version up now. Hope you enjoy

Foreign Objects (Original Mix) by Seandroid

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Dirty bassline! Solid and dirty! Drums and bass are very simple but sound very defined, and heavy. Overall mixdown and sound are great so nothing to comment on there, good job.

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I'm just going to be honest, here, and say I'm not a fan of the track but I really do like what you're doing with it and my lack of appreciation for the music may have more to do with my current mood than the merit of the music, itself. That said, the production values are spot on and the introduction and quasi-call-and-response to the various themes really got my attention. You seem to have a marvelous attention to detail which I think is going to pay huge dividends. Definitely looking forward to your next piece.

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Originally posted by Illumin Dirty bassline! Solid and dirty! Drums and bass are very simple but sound very defined, and heavy. Overall mixdown and sound are great so nothing to comment on there, good job.

Hey, thanks man! I appreciate it! Glad you enjoy the bass line, it is simple but that kind of sound is necessary for that start and stop groove I love in dance music.

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Originally posted by EddieZilker I'm just going to be honest, here, and say I'm not a fan of the track but I really do like what you're doing with it and my lack of appreciation for the music may have more to do with my current mood than the merit of the music, itself. That said, the production values are spot on and the introduction and quasi-call-and-response to the various themes really got my attention. You seem to have a marvelous attention to detail which I think is going to pay huge dividends. Definitely looking forward to your next piece.

Hey, if it's not your style that's cool with me, but thanks man! I like your work and I really appreciate that.

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