Ouch.

This is clipping all over the place and there are simply no dynamics in it at all. The mixing in this is just horrible I'm afraid. From 1m 23s onwards the kick almost disappears entirely in places. The tune is also similar to your other track (which is much better IMO).

Sorry, but I really think you need to go back to the drawing board with this one....

Mike

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Agreed. There is literally no mix. it's just a rough cut really. I should have expressed that in the post. My buddy and I are about to invest in Logic Studio and step up from garage band.

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Originally posted by Entropy87 Agreed. There is literally no mix. it's just a rough cut really. I should have expressed that in the post. My buddy and I are about to invest in Logic Studio and step up from garage band.

Cool, keep at it!

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Originally posted by Entropy87 Agreed. There is literally no mix. it's just a rough cut really. I should have expressed that in the post. My buddy and I are about to invest in Logic Studio and step up from garage band.

i agree with Avatar One...however..this reminds me of Night Rider..
Kit come in...can you hear me Kit?

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hahaha that's cool i guess!

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Originally posted by Entropy87 hahaha that's cool i guess!

yeah !!

keep focusing on what you want to achieve man.....and you will get there eventually....every step is a step forward...
cheers

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Once we get a good program for mixing with and learn it i think we will have a MUCH better sound. We appreciate the kind words though

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Originally posted by CREST yeah !! keep focusing on what you want to achieve man.....and you will get there eventually....every step is a step forward... cheers

Unless your trying to do a moonwalk

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All the levels have been tweaked and the clipping should be gone in both tracks. Anyone who commented before care to give another listen and see what you think? Also have 3 new tracks in the works that should be done soon we will be posting for evaluation!
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thanks!

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