A Track ive just about finished, would appreciate some feedback,

Thanks guys

clicky here

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Originally posted by DJRYAN™ EPIC!!

Thanks m8

Gonna be straight. Your composition is fantastic, good programming and the production/mixing is solid. However, I think your sound/instruments needs to be more updated (if you want a current sound that is). Still, your songs (checked them out on soundcloud) are GOOD and better than most. I just think with some updating, your stuff would be on major labels.

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This is an alright track but that bass line needs to be changed up. Kick/bass/kick/bass/kick/bass just gets old, you could do an awesome rolling bassline with a cool pattern and it would make the track that much better.

I'm really not a fan of the progression the track enters into either, it lacks coherence to me, sounds kind of everywhere.

In terms of sound, it sounds very compressed and smooshed, the bass and the kick start to sound muddy once everything else is stacked on top of them.

It has a very unique atmosphere, it makes me think of the city at night, but I think the track needs some fine tuning.

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