nice work tom , esp like the intro..love the way u bring in the bass.. i think it could use one more sound in there..or maybe a longer break and then back into the beat..some delayed out vocal hits might sound really good i think..good work on the vibe and flow though ..u have a good track on ur hands here my friend.

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Cheers mate, yeah i know what you mean its not very adventurous arrangement wise. Unfortunately i made this in college the other week and the file has since decided to corrupt itself so all i have is this render. Thanks

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not bad, honestly i think this would benefit with a warm atmospheric pad in the background(to keep the track more glued), you can totally try it out for fun in your daw by sampling, could be a matter of opinion here though.

Yeah i know what you mean ill give it a go, cheers for the feedback

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