1st time poster over here, I'm more active in the production forum for those who lurk over there , so hi

No One Knows is a track by our own member Cryophonik who supplied the remix packs, opinions and pointer is what i'm after, thanks in advance

No One Knowns (One Release Remix) by One_Release

Last edited by Dj_Kile on Mar-21-2011 at 17:43

guys, don't be shy !

Im feeling this man, nice big sound! Good sound choice too theres plenty going on here and it still all sounds good. Id like to see the melody building up at around 6:08 to come back in with the beat, would sound good IMO, it sounds a little bit empty at that point as if its building to something which doesn't quite home. Hope you know what i mean? Nice work, keep it up!

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hey there , thanks for the feedback,
well yeah at 6 esh i went for more raw approach, maybe feels like something missing there , maybe some mid bass can fill this up
but yeah , your on the point there

Mix sounds good. Track arrangement is good.

However, the vocals really feel like an afterthought. I find with vocal EDM, they don't work unless you base the structure of the track to incorporate it as the "main instrument" so to speak.

I really like the energy of the bass from 6:31 onwards. It feels a bit too passive prior to that. Maybe have that bass come in throughout the track since it drives it.

the vocals do need some adjustment this can be felt if you hear the track for the 1st time, specially in the break, i'll see what i can do, i think some better equing can do the trick. but your right

the track was supposed to be settle throughout, kind of mellow, and then a surprise pickup in the end, if i introduced that bass before it wouldn't be that way, i supposed i tried to be clever on this one, don't know yet if this will pay off :P