my first thought is that the arp is too fast for the melody/song. might just be me but if slowed down i think it would be more suited. the bassline needs to be more interesting as well, maybe something deeper sounding and sidechained to a 4/4 trigger to give it a swelling feel

after that do throw in some more layers of percussion to give the track more flow, and you've got yourself a decent track IMO

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okay thanks!!!

i changed it a bit tell me if u like it or smthn xD

http://soundcloud.com/oscar-alvarado/were-going-to-the-bench