some cool ideas, but no direction at all.

I will try to give your effort some justice. the acidy sample, it's just kinda of weak. you could have a punchier, more percy sample there doing a lot better job. Why tease with the little bass rumbles? sounds kind of random to me. save that for when the track gets going, and make a nice kick/bass loop with some proper groove. after the break, it sounds like the track started over. very boring, no movement. some OK synths, but the sound selection is very dated and poor. the random harpsichord sound really exemplifies that. i would say, focus on an 8 bar loop, and get it sounding full, and don't stop until you have a groove. there is zero synth work in this track. try to work on that, see what others say too. keep'em coming

thanks for the feedback! just a question

what do you mean by these more specifically?

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but the sound selection is very dated and poor. the random harpsichord sound really exemplifies that.

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there is zero synth work in this track. try to work on that, see what others say too. keep'em coming

& evolve what do you mean by no direction? just want to know how I can better myself but don't really get what you're saying by that..


thanks guys!!

too early to say anything, keep producing mate.

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Originally posted by utdarsenal thanks for the feedback! just a question what do you mean by these more specifically? & evolve what do you mean by no direction? just want to know how I can better myself but don't really get what you're saying by that.. thanks guys!!

no direction as in it never goes anywhere. like a rather undeveloped idea.