Fixed the bass and boosted the rest of the sound

Nice job on leaving the master clean, I can actually hear some dynamics.

The polyphony on that synth isn't working out very well, it has a very clashy sound. I see what you are going for, but at that octave the dissonance just kind of clashes rather than shines. The kick is quite far back in the mix. It sounds like a decent enough idea, but it doesn't develop into much.

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Originally posted by Evolve140 Nice job on leaving the master clean, I can actually hear some dynamics. The polyphony on that synth isn't working out very well, it has a very clashy sound. I see what you are going for, but at that octave the dissonance just kind of clashes rather than shines. The kick is quite far back in the mix. It sounds like a decent enough idea, but it doesn't develop into much.

Thanks for the feedback. As far as leaving the master clean, that's usually how I go by things anymore, I just fix up my instruments on their own channels and barely even touch the master channel.

I'm going to play around with this some more. I think you're right about the octaves. My main concern as far as that goes is getting better depth in the track, I think there's enough here worth saving.