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I feel like this unintentionally parodies the terrible dirty dutch crap that somehow manages to be popular despite being incredibly annoying.

Sorry man, it's seriously incoherent and some of the sounds are so cheesy they're amusing. I can't judge the mix because I'm on laptop speakers at the moment but I can check it out when I get home.

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Originally posted by Seandroid I feel like this unintentionally parodies the terrible dirty dutch crap that somehow manages to be popular despite being incredibly annoying. Sorry man, it's seriously incoherent and some of the sounds are so cheesy they're amusing. I can't judge the mix because I'm on laptop speakers at the moment but I can check it out when I get home.

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Last edited by Evolve140 on Apr-26-2011 at 02:39

Lots of fair weather friends on SC, though. You see, the synths in this are so poorly designed, each and every sound is either cheesy or extremely cliche. The drums needs a lot of EQing, especially the 16th note hihats, some swing wouldn't hurt either. The melodies sound something like a Gumby theme song or some kind of sock puppet show.

As for the mix, the kick is completely hidden in the mix. The patterns are redundant. Try to tighten up the drums and EQ them, it sounds very incohesive. with anyone I give negative feedback to I just also say, take it with a grain of salt. keep trying mate.

Last edited by Evolve140 on Apr-26-2011 at 02:56