Its very good, very well mastered and good synths & strings.. but the melody isnt much... it uses ur average trance chords IMO...

But the lead is great ! (Altho, slightly high pitched in places) And the break down, beautiful I really like that piano.. alot !

Overal, a good track.. nothing too specail but amazingly mastered and a very nice breakdown !

7. 8 out of 10

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Thx for reviewing Dan

The buildup is quite standard... but I think it works well I think, just meant to create a summer-ish vibe

Damn, still didn't get an 8 or more from you
Cheers,
Wim/LW

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Wim - I wouldnt give my own tracks an 8 or more

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was just kidding, no problem Dan, honesty lasts for long

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wow, this is another masterpiece from u, lightworks!
i really love the strings.. it just sounds so perfect
i agree with D_G here about the melody, and i also think i`ve heard this melody before
oh yeah.. some things in the rythm.. they sound 2 fruityloopy, but they`re only some samples of which the volume is very low and u can`t notice them that good...

good track and keep on goin!

grtz,

DJ Mantis


ps. damnnnn man, wanneer kom je nou es online tis nu wiekend duz vanavond (zaterdag) en morgenavond ga ik op stap.. maandag bennik weer `s avonds/ `s nachts online duz dan weet je dat

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thx for the review mantis

hmm, i'm not sure if i heard this melo before... it's just a popular rhythm maybe? on which synth does that fruityloopy effect take place? i didn't use any 3xOSC though for the synths

see you laterz,
Wim/LW

PS: ik probeer dikwijls om online to komen, maar ofwel is het dan al te laat ofwel ben ik weg... kzal vanavond mijn uiterste best doen, misschien ben ik nog onlineals je trug bent van weggeweest

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quote:

Originally posted by Lightworks on which synth does that fruityloopy effect take place? i didn't use any 3xOSC though for the synths

not on an synth, but on some percussion sounds...

grtz, DJ Mantis

ps. oke is goed maar ik denk niet echt dak vanavond nog online kom na ut stappen (das toch wel gouw rond 2 uur) maja.. we zien wel, anders gwoon volgende week `n xtje

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ah maybe a shaker or some kind of hihat... don't know, i practically use all samples from myself, none from fruity

well, glad you like the tune, thx

Wim/LW

PS: om 2u zit ik zeker nog op, dus als je dan zin hebt, klop dan maar eens op m'n deur

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Well,

Im disappointed alot wim, im sorry.

Its really one boring track, this is just me, as fan and my personal oppinion.

But id like that the music evolved a little overtime
this way too old lightworks sound. And the melody is downright boring.
I feel like, Forever was a great hit, and this feels like one of those rushed follow ups that every artist does once hes had a commerciel hit.

Try and evolve your sound, and work more on the feeling.
It falls into "just another lightworks track category", you need to change your method's of making tracks, every thrice or fourth track a little. So you evolve.

And with as Dan said, a melody that just doesnt say anything, this isnt rated high in my book.

You said it yourself honesty is better in the long run

Forever was awesome, now go make a track like that, but change things, break some rulez

And gives us another reason why the lightworks stands for top quality trance

cheers mate

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well, mac if you heard some ten in a row of my tracks, you'd probably feel this boring... but let's not be too subjective please

i mean, if you listened to some five remixes from ferry corsten or cj stone, you would have had it too i believe... evolving doesn't happen from one day to the other

right now i'm focusing on trance quality more than originality... trying to improve sounds and so on... getting to know every tweak there is.

well, sorry to disappoint you
Wim/LW

PS: i did not rush anything, i spent almost whole summer on these tunes...

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Well, take it as criticism


I know its hard trying to get to know every single thing in producing.
So its hard to keep up with everything

But i thought of this as tune amongst your other tracks.
I should have complemented the mastering, i was a little fast......

Shame on me

It is alot more clear than your earlier tracks, really ALOT.
Im just trying to help ya know, maybe its time to focus a little bit on your sound rather than mastering?

Also remember its only my oppinion, im not here to slaughter ya....


oh well the truth is i am, DIE YOU DAMN! BELGIAN! IM STEALING ALL YOUR CHOCOLATES NOW MWUAHAHAHAHAHA

Mental note to self:Update current humor

Cheers wim

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