A new track I made. Hope you enjoy!

Lilja - Yellow Eyes

//Richard

Hehe nice song for driving in night

Maybe the "kick/bass" is a little too low (Personally) But it's really good =)

Thank you!

I tried with some more volume on kick & base, and you were right, it sounds better. So the the link is now updated.

//Richard

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/Richard [ oFFbalaNce ]

I like how the main melody isn't 4/4

Thanks!

I think these kind of patterns sound great with some swing, so I usually end up with melodies like this

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/Richard [ oFFbalaNce ]

Hehe yea already better (personally) I get more in the beats :P

The stabs that come it at 1:00 sound a bit off. Try making them a little more solid perhaps? I love the mix to this, very nicely done. This is ASOT "On the Beach" material.

At 2:35, the lead that comes just fits so well. You did a really fantastic job with this.

Check out my latest track if you get a chance, tell me what you think:
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...7839&forumid=74

Thanks!!

I listened to your tune. I've been mixing, so my ears might be fatigue, but I think your song has to much high end. The hihat actually takes over. Perhaps you could sidechain it to the kick? Also I can only hear the base from your kick and not from the baseline.

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/Richard [ oFFbalaNce ]

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Originally posted by oFFbalaNce Thanks!! I listened to your tune. I've been mixing, so my ears might be fatigue, but I think your song has to much high end. The hihat actually takes over. Perhaps you could sidechain it to the kick? Also I can only hear the base from your kick and not from the baseline.

Good ears on the bass. I don't actually have a bassline added in that preview. I just finished adding it in the project file.

Really clean track here! Send this out ASAP

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Definitely like this. Mix sounds pristine. I use monitors that are slightly bright and the hats sound fine to me.

Gl with the track.

@kevin shawn & theterran,

Thanks! Hopefully you'll hear it at some club pretty soon

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