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| quote: | Originally posted by paulazizeh
Sicc,
Thank you for your feedback on the kick and the bassline. Next time I'll some heavier phasor or some distortion, I'll with both effect to work with the basslines. As far as vocals go, how did the vocals startle you? Were they too loud, too quiet? I want to get more specific input about the vocals so I can make sure to fix them when I make another track with vocals but for now I'll work on the vocals a little bit and the basslines.
Again, I really appreciate your input, means a lot.
Thanks
Paul Azizeh |
The vocals startled me because they seemed to abruptly enter the track, and were a bit loud. but then again thats just my opinion, others may feel different. Maybe ease into the vocals a bit, subtle entrance yet strongly present or something to that effect. And no problem, we all need feedback to improve! good luck,
EDIT - just lisnted to it again, and the vocals ease in nicely, but its right when she begins saying "no no no", specifically on the first no, that it seems to hurt the ears a bit. just my thoughts on it! Her voice is piercing, a bit loud.
peace.
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