Hey I'm 18 y old trance-lover who loves also making it. I have about an year experience of DAW:s (Live 8). And the first step to improve is admitting that u SUCK, and i do. Tuning and mastering is my weakest part, so have been training hard to get some of those freqs right. I have been on hibernate past six months due to heavy workload on school but now im kinda back on track, so one of my creations is this.

http://soundcloud.com/domestymusicc...led-project-vip

So I'm asking can u give me hint or two on this track. It still has flaws,but I think i have done kind of OK job.

Its my "thirdish" training project. Its kinda repetative, but the melody and content wasnt so planned I just tried to get it sound more professonial like. I have tried to push some techical aspects as EQ and compression farther, but dont really know am I able to. So if you have the time I would really appreciate your comments! BPM will go higher its kinda slow now.

Oh, sorry for posting on this part of the forums..

Yeah, i wanted the full feeling especially on the breakdown/rising part, so thers like 4 pads (whit high pass). It really needs work to get in shape. The Base is 3-layered and not really mixed well, Low freq part somehow wont feel right. But the clap yeah. Its too dry but i dont really know how to get it more wet. Any advice?

Thanks!