Would really appreciate some feedback

Matt Leigh - Wonderland (Original Mix) Work in Progress by P.H.E.W


Thank you

Intro a bit long winded. The off beat high percussion is way too loud in the mix. Where's the energy control on that white noise? No use in having it there just to have it there. That hi-percussive sound is WAY too loud, and your actual hihats can barely be heard in the mix. Mostly, this is an issue with mixdown in your track. The idea is decent, but the mixdown is terrible because of how loud that high percussive sound is. The kick and bass seem to sit pretty well though. The second breakdown is actually pretty nice and started to sound pretty well dance floor ready. Hate to sound like a broken record, but fix that high percussive sound on the off beat. Destroys the tracks.


edit: here is your A&B.. .same bleepy sounds in this track. Much less reliance on it though , and it fits in the mix. good luck.

Last edited by Evolve140 on Oct-22-2011 at 07:06

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Originally posted by Evolve140 Intro a bit long winded.

Have to agree. Otherwise nice song.

Cheers guys.The track is intended for an intro to a mix, i think im gonna shorten it by 40 secounds.This is an idea that ive only spent 4 hours on, so i havent properly done a mixdown, but will.Gonna work on the track more next week, on the breakdown, and add more groove and shuffle in there to make it more dancey and ill post up the results