We just finished this song 2 days ago and now we would like to hear some honest opinions about it of course!

Mon Calamari - 16 Bars by Mon Calamari

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Any kind of feedback is highly appreciated!

Quite a nice dark flavour, but nothing like enough evolution and journey. Check out some recent tracks by Tom Laws and see how with just percs and bass you can set up a winding building journey - then couple this with your melodic ideas.

Think about your hatz for example - it seems like just a repeating loop. Instead it could be a gradual assembly of hats, some of which only make an appearance once in every 2 bars. This way you make something of love and care and thought.

Keep working fella

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sup brahs

gave my feedback on the misc, and agree with the dirtboxer up there

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