The 2 main parts just before and after the break are very good indeed, pretty haunting mate. Love this warm mix too.

The break FOR ME is a nothing break, I'd skip it, but this is a taste thang is all.

The intro first halve cvould be a bit more funky - to me there is a dange people my switch off as the intro doesn't really hint at the quality to come, for example those choir type sounds are very basic and a bit clumsy.

I'm being super picky, overall very skilled work mate.

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Great track! This is Trance i love break is awesome (IMO)

Kick could be a bit stronger on low frequancies. It's not full track, isn't it? because if it is you must make it longer

@ Richard Butler: Thanks man. I really appreciate your honest opinion. No way will i take it the wrong way, your comments are going to help me. Overall im glad you enjoyed it though. I'll be taking your thoughts into consideration

@ M.O This is just a preview sample, the track is a DJ friendly version with more. Thanks for your time in listening and commenting

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