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least offending thing you guys have made so far. Well that i have heard.
The kick is too prominent overpowering the bass. The slap bass needs a bit more attention as it just sounds like a one sample hit ie lazy. You could have a little more fun with it giving your track some melodic colour. The strings, too cliche for me. That offbeat hihat is just too loud. The point of the offbeat hihat was to sort of bridge the kick and snare but if you make it too loud, it stops acting as abridge and becomes a rhythmic point of importance making your track sound like oommpa circus music.
The diva acapella is too dry. This would work 15 years ago when this kinda house was made and even tho you are referencing that genre, it needs to be somewhat current or why even bother. By dry, i mean too just there you know wasn't made for the track and because you don't sort of mold it , it just doesn't fit even tho it should.
The horn stabs are in the wrong key.
Still don't get the whole tranny thing. I mean if you are members of the LGBT community and want to make a point, cool i guess but I don't care for it. I personally find that the gays or I suppose in more technical terms , fun boys, unappealing. I don't trust people that wear pants that tight. Only a robber or rapist would need that sort of wind resistance advantage. I think they were on to something with the whole leather thing but this new generation of fanny bandits are shifty to say the least.
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old stuff from days gone by (2001-2004)
Mad For Brad's gay little contest
Last edited by Looney4Clooney on Nov-23-2011 at 00:35
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