It sounds pretty good. The vocals seem a little a) loud and b) mono. The latter being pronounced due to the amount of reverb which makes it obvious there is not much stereo and sounds strange. The drums are a little simple, try a drum loop instead of kick/hihat/kick/hihat/kick/hihat/kick/hihat. Every producer uses good stereo drum loops now. If your song doesn't have one it just sounds empty and old fashioned.

It lacks a real 'punch' but it is OK.

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