I've been working on this track for a little over week.. I like the way it sounds so far. Any feedback or suggestions is appreciated!

Man I always like to be honest. It's ok, but really it sounds like simple background music in a film. Tremors or something.

It doesn't have a distinctive personality. Leave it and don't listen for a few weeks, come back and then see what you think. Play it very quietly - a good track will tell you if' it's decent at very low volume.

Keep on the journey.

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Thanks Richard, I do appreciate the feedback, although I do not agree with everything you said. The buildup may be a little weak, yes, but I think you may not have listened through to the first melody, because it has a good, melodic, personality imo.

I do respect your honesty, because everyone's entitled to their own opinion.

Cheers!