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intro sounds very dated - I think it's the oldschool kick.
a lot of the sounds are rather dated - it sounds a bit like scatterbomb.
your kick then starts to add to the bassline and gets somewhat ill defined - separate the two (and use a better kick!)
the bass is making it all sound muddy.
like the breakdown though - you can tell you are musical. you really need to work on individual eq of elements (and some time in sound selection) and probably invest in some decent decent monitors
doesn't really deliver after the breakdown, more percs should be fed in a lot sooner.
it's got potential though
hope this helps
T
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