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Sensuerea
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Misfortune - Kittens WIP - what to improve on?

So I'm working on a new track and it's coming along nicely I think. Please take some time, give it a listen and tell me how can I improve it.

Thanks!



Outro under construction.


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Whoops, I just realized that link is broken. Fixed now!


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I love the intro, nice laid back lounge house.
I'd bring out your melodic elements more in the first section.

I'm not sure the section at 2:35 is is working musically for me - maybe it's a little over complex for the type of tune.

the whole thing has a nice feel.

your kick drum is pretty weak though

hope this helps


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Sensuerea
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Thank you for your opinion!

You're probably right about bringing more musical elements sooner. I will introduce full chord progression or extra instrument.

2:35 - do you mean that lead melody that's playing? I don't know, I really like it.

Do you think that kick needs more bottom end?

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You bet it does, thanks!


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Evolve140
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Pretty nice dude. Nice hearing that bassline move around in the mix like that, dope. I think this sounds pretty good.

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Pretty nice dude. Nice hearing that bassline move around in the mix like that, dope. I think this sounds pretty good.


Thank you!


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By now you probably now that I left you some comments on SC

Really nice work man.

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By now you probably now that I left you some comments on SC

Really nice work man.

Darek


I do, mate. Thank you so much for them


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