Hey

That arp you have in the beginning sounds very familiar, sylenth1 preset?
Around the 1.30 mark you dont a acid arp and lead thing, space that out abit. Everything seems stacked together. Also automate the volume, bring each element into focus seperatly.

Not a fan of the Melody.

Your Break is pretty cool at 3.53, was not expecting that at all.
You need to add something interesting thou after 8bars of it. Doesn't go anywhere. Maybe make some FX fills of the mid bass, like a retrigger + reverb increasing and a some filter automation.

After that break it was repetitive.

Goodluck